Okay, wow.  First off, a huge thank you for actually reading, then proving you've read, the comments.  That's amazing.  

Second, you're doing a great job with the dream scenes.  That's one of the things I really like about this.  One second she's chilling in her futon, the next she's wearing completely different clothes and doing weird random things.  Sometimes, I'm like, "Hey, I thought she just -- Oh, right.  Kewl."  

Third, mysteries and the unexplained are great!  One of my favorite novels has some rather inexplicable parts to it that are only explained in the afterword by the author.  A sort of a behind-the-scenes look, if you will.  It doesn't detract from the story at all if the characters, or the readers, don't understand everything.  Especially since, as you've pointed out, everything revolves around *one* character's perspective/POV.  

Last, again, a thank you for reading/commenting on the notes, and DON'T STOP!  It's an awesome story!