The last sentence in the sixth paragraph seems a bit iffy to me: "And also, she couldn’t help remembering, where she been running in the other shrine when she slipped and fell."

At the very least I think that "running in the other shrine" should be "running in the other direction", and perhaps "where she been" should be "had she been"? And if she's questioning her memory, then the sentence could also be punctuated with a question mark. On the other hand, if the memory is very clear, yet with an unclear explanation, perhaps the sentence could read: "And also, she couldn’t help remembering that she had been running in the other direction when she slipped and fell."

Just a bit of unsolicited amateur editing. :-)